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PostSubject: Lost in CyberSpace - Part Two    Lost in CyberSpace - Part Two  EmptyTue Nov 15, 2011 10:23 am

Okay, so since I don't have Microsoft Word I'll be posting my first draft here. Also, apparently my first post has been taken down so the site doesn't get messed up, but now I have no way of knowing how I described all the characters, so I might end up changing someone's appearance by accident..... :/

Julia: (stares) What the heck is a random door doing here?
Jack: (shrugs) Well, we have nowhere else to go, so...?
Amy: (gasps and points) Ah! The scary man said something!
Jack: ...
Seth: (laughs and takes Amy's hand, who looks at him adoringly) Jack's right. We have no choice anyway. Let's go.

He starts walking towards the door, Amy beside him.
Julia, looking slightly hesitant follows. Jack pauses, and then sulks after them.

They reach the door, and without a second thought, Seth reaches out to open the door.

Julia: Wai-

The words aren't even out of her mouth as Seth jerks open the door. Suddenly everything
is very bright. They all yell and shield their eyes.


A second later the light fades. We now have a full view of the Otakuzone Front Page.
It says Happy Halloween Otakuzone! Before anyone can react, Amy shouts.


Amy: PIKACHU! (runs towards the picture of Pikachu)
Julia: Amy, wai-

For the second time, Julia doesn't get to finish her sentence.
A vortex sucks them all into a new room.


There are pictures of differently dressed
OZ avatars everywhere, and a few sofas here and there.
It looks like a waiting room. There's a counter one the left wall,
and the four of them hurry towards it. RedKat's avatar sits there.


RedKat: Welcome to the shop! Our shop moderators have worked hard
to make avatar items of your preference!

Seth glances at Julia. Wonders why she looks so angry.

Jack tries to interrupt, but RedKat keeps going, talking in full speed.

RedKat: ... we have fitting rooms for both male and female avatars! The unisex items
are available in both rooms. Our Halloween rares are no longer available, but please
enjoy trying out our OZ Anniversary items! (tilts her head, eyes closed, smiling)

There is a moment of silence. Will she say anything else?

Jack: Um, I -

RedKat: (Suddenly) Have fun!

There's another moment of silence. Julia turns to Jack and Seth, whispering to them.
Amy is busy staring at all the pictures.


Julia: Do you think she'll believe us if we tell her?
Seth: (shakes his head) Not likely. We got sucked into Bad Gateway? I wouldn't believe that.
Jack: ...
Julia: Jack?
Jack: (sighs)
Seth and Julia: (don't say anything)

Finally, Jack speaks as if nothing happened.

Jack: I think we look like regular OZers to her. If we start going on about being sucked into our
computers, she may think we're spammers or something. I say we try to figure our own way out.
Seth: But how do we-
Amy: PWETTY CLOTHES! (runs straight into the female's dressing room. Julia muffles a yell and runs
after the little girl.)

A pause. Seth and Jack stare at each other.

Jack: Well, we can't go in there. (Gestures towards the door like it's hell)
Seth: (nods very seriously) Which means...
Jack and Seth, together, lounging on the sofa with random mugs of coffee: Not our problem!

Loud bangs and yells issue from behind the door. Then silence. The two boys bolt upright, coffee
mugs gone, and stare in complete fear at the door.
After a moment, the door opens to reveal Amy, still in pigtails, wearing Chii's dress done. She's smiling, sucking
on a rainbow lollipop. Seth stands up, looking momentarily worried.
Just then Julia appears, and Seth's mouth drops open.
She's wearing Western's Party dress with matching shoes.
Her hair is pulled up slightly, so the locks fall down around her face elegantly.


Seth: Ah... er... um...
Julia: (she was blushing, but now she looks fierce.) WHAT?
Seth: (shrinks away) Sorry, I.... you look nice.
Julia: (blushes again) R... really?

Jack: (in the background, under his breath) Her moods change so fast...
Julia: (Glares at him) WHAT was that?
Jack: Nothing, nothing.... Drama Queen.
Julia: (jumps at him)
Seth: (laughs) Well, since you changed...

Walks into the male dressing room and comes out minutes later wearing the Steampunk shirt, shoes,
and frills, holding the mask in one hand.


Seth: Well?
Julia: (thinks: He look's so handsome!)
Amy: (rushes towards him and hugs him.) You look cute!
Seth: (laughs, hugs her back) thanks, Amy. (looks at Jack) Do you want to change?

There's a moment of silence. Seth and Julia don't say anything. Then Jack speaks as if
he didn't randomly take a minute to reply.


Jack: Nah, I like me the way I am. (adjusts his sunglasses)
Amy: (hides behind Seth) Scary...
Jack: ...

Seth: (looks at RedKat) So how do we pay?

Just then a small blue girl with a horn rushes forward, holding a small yellow sign that has an
exclamation point on it. (The girl that comes on the login error) She yells.


Girl: Error! You need to login first!
Seth: Um... (scratches the back of his head) Can I just give you my username and password?

The girl stares at him, and then nods. She pulls out a pen from nowhere and hands him the sign, the back side
up so he can write. He scribbles something, and she shoots of.


Seth: That was weird.
Julia: Whatever, now what?
Amy: (finished with her lollipop, points in the distance at a small green cat. It's the green cat above the words ZONE on the OZ page) KITTY! (rushes towards it.)
Seth: I guess we're going this way. (runs after her) Amy!

Jack and Julia follow, yelling, Julia hoisting up her dress so she doesn't fall.

Julia: You GUYS!!

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PostSubject: Re: Lost in CyberSpace - Part Two    Lost in CyberSpace - Part Two  EmptyTue Nov 15, 2011 11:05 am

LOL This is sooo fun xDD
I love, LOVE it *^*
Can't wait to see it into a manga Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Lost in CyberSpace - Part Two    Lost in CyberSpace - Part Two  EmptyTue Nov 15, 2011 1:45 pm

Haha! I'm going to have fun drawing this Very Happy
Gotta go stalk RedKat to see if she changes her avi :/
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PostSubject: Re: Lost in CyberSpace - Part Two    Lost in CyberSpace - Part Two  EmptyTue Nov 15, 2011 6:02 pm

The first part is still in the 'dump' section of the forum. I'll move it back here if you need to. I never delete stuff here. Never know when you might need it. p:
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