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PostSubject: 8:20 is the title woot *^*   8:20 is the title woot *^* EmptyThu Jul 07, 2011 9:21 am

It's mystery at the beginning, and then THERE SHALL BE BL OHOHOHOHO. *^*/ Fabulous. And then mpreg. *^*/

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A crime scene unfolds. Policemen spread strips of yellow tape around the corner of a street. Rain washes into the gutter along with debris. A wad of garnet hair washes along with it. SFX: ‘splish, splish’

Two policemen stand over the mutilated body of a young woman. Her hair is shredded, laying in bloody clumps around her head. Her eyes are closed.

One policeman is younger, tall with a lithe build. His black hair is to his shoulders. His uniform is damp from the rain. The other is older, with a graying head of hair and matching moustache. He holds a colorful umbrella above his head. He stares straight at the body. The other looks away. SFX: *looks away*

Robin: It seems as though it’s another strike from the Lady Killer. It has his usual signs. SFX: ‘coughs’ The ripped hair, the neat cuts on the face and neck…it’s clearly linked to the other murders around here recently.

Old Cop Guy Dude Face What: I agree. *he pulls out a notepad and pen SFX:‘scribble, scribble’* Time of death is approximately 8:20 am. Let’s get this body to the mor-

??? : Wait! SFX: ‘Step, step’

A young man runs up. SFX: ‘pant, pant’ He is about the same height as the young cop, with striking, pale blond hair and bright green eyes. His face is flushed from running, and he stops by the policemen. He wears a casual set of faded denim jeans and a simple t-shirt.

OCGDFW: Sir, this is a crime sc-

???: Roberta! ROBERTA! *he grabs the older cops arm* That’s my sister! T-that’s my- SFX: ‘pant’

The man begins to sob. An older woman runs off, as if she were trying to keep up with this man. She pulls him back by the shoulder. SFX: ‘huff, huff’ ‘grab’

Lady: Celio! Get back here this instant!

Celio: *pushes off, not looking at the Lady* Roberta! Oh, Roberta! SFX : ‘sob sob’

Tear tracks run down his face and mix with the morning drizzle. SFX : ‘chokes’ Robin looks to the man, then looks away. SFX ‘looks away’


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PostSubject: BOO   8:20 is the title woot *^* EmptyThu Jul 07, 2011 11:20 am

I think I'll just skip the sex scene if there'll be one lulz
so the garnet hair is the victim's hair and Robin is the younger policeman?
by the way, the blond hair and green eyes part kinda reminds me of someone I know *^*
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PostSubject: Re: 8:20 is the title woot *^*   8:20 is the title woot *^* EmptyThu Jul 07, 2011 5:19 pm

Butterrrr

I'm proofreading yours, email it to meh! <3
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PostSubject: Re: 8:20 is the title woot *^*   8:20 is the title woot *^* EmptyThu Jul 07, 2011 10:46 pm

randomjoker55 wrote:
I think I'll just skip the sex scene if there'll be one lulz
so the garnet hair is the victim's hair and Robin is the younger policeman?
by the way, the blond hair and green eyes part kinda reminds me of someone I know *^*

...
I didn't even realize that.
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PostSubject: Re: 8:20 is the title woot *^*   8:20 is the title woot *^* EmptyFri Jul 08, 2011 1:35 am

I love the mystery part..^^b
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PostSubject: BOO   8:20 is the title woot *^* EmptyFri Jul 08, 2011 1:48 am

Butter wrote:
randomjoker55 wrote:
I think I'll just skip the sex scene if there'll be one lulz
so the garnet hair is the victim's hair and Robin is the younger policeman?
by the way, the blond hair and green eyes part kinda reminds me of someone I know *^*

...
I didn't even realize that.
VDSUIABFJHSGFVBFN

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
I thought you did it on purpose *^*
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PostSubject: Re: 8:20 is the title woot *^*   8:20 is the title woot *^* EmptyFri Jul 08, 2011 1:37 pm

randomjoker55 wrote:
Butter wrote:
randomjoker55 wrote:
I think I'll just skip the sex scene if there'll be one lulz
so the garnet hair is the victim's hair and Robin is the younger policeman?
by the way, the blond hair and green eyes part kinda reminds me of someone I know *^*

...
I didn't even realize that.
VDSUIABFJHSGFVBFN

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
I thought you did it on purpose *^*

I guess I just got Wolfram on the mind *^*/
But he'll be way different
cause Celios is a seme
and Wolfram is an uke.
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PostSubject: Re: 8:20 is the title woot *^*   8:20 is the title woot *^* EmptySun Jul 10, 2011 10:38 am

Butter, do you want me to change the title of this thread, or can you?
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PostSubject: Re: 8:20 is the title woot *^*   8:20 is the title woot *^* EmptyMon Jul 11, 2011 4:29 am

Butter wrote:
randomjoker55 wrote:
Butter wrote:
randomjoker55 wrote:
I think I'll just skip the sex scene if there'll be one lulz
so the garnet hair is the victim's hair and Robin is the younger policeman?
by the way, the blond hair and green eyes part kinda reminds me of someone I know *^*

...
I didn't even realize that.
VDSUIABFJHSGFVBFN

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
I thought you did it on purpose *^*

I guess I just got Wolfram on the mind *^*/
But he'll be way different
cause Celios is a seme
and Wolfram is an uke.
@^@

so Robin will be an uke and the old cop doesn't have an important role?
I thought Robin is the seme and Celio is the uke
I drew them wrong lulz xD
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PostSubject: Re: 8:20 is the title woot *^*   8:20 is the title woot *^* EmptyMon Jul 11, 2011 3:47 pm

randomjoker55 wrote:
Butter wrote:
randomjoker55 wrote:
Butter wrote:
randomjoker55 wrote:
I think I'll just skip the sex scene if there'll be one lulz
so the garnet hair is the victim's hair and Robin is the younger policeman?
by the way, the blond hair and green eyes part kinda reminds me of someone I know *^*

...
I didn't even realize that.
VDSUIABFJHSGFVBFN

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
I thought you did it on purpose *^*

I guess I just got Wolfram on the mind *^*/
But he'll be way different
cause Celios is a seme
and Wolfram is an uke.
@^@

so Robin will be an uke and the old cop doesn't have an important role?
I thought Robin is the seme and Celio is the uke
I drew them wrong lulz xD

*explodes*
I guess it'll just make it more surprising then *3*
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oh wow! so good... I feel like crying!!!!
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