My Adventure Script thing. Feel free to come up with a title 8D.

Summary: Basically the manga is about 5 or 4 people from all over the world. They find out some website in school that claims to do something magical, but it doesn't. They go home and click the button on the website. ( You'll fine out about the 3 or 4 other people in the second scene. Since Jasmine has already been introduced). It takes them to the world of Otakuzone. They meet the queen (onesytwosy) and her "Cabinet" (the supermods I'm lazy so I'm not going 2 write out their names). She tells them about a group of scammers on the loose. She then sends them on a mission to find them. Then they travel all around. Once they find the scammers the super moderators will help them with their superpowers (ex. Wiki Super Mod, StargazerLily, will have the power to access any information. Chat Super Mod, Katantoon, will have the power to talk to people all cross the world).
The End.
(I'm going to asks them if I can do that, if now then my story is not going to change as much 8D. I always have a backup plan. I never have a backup plan.

Anyways this volume is pretty short, but the next one is going to be much longer. This is just an introduction to the whole thing or something like that..

ANYWAYS. On to the script.. right?
(It's really short ;-;.. and boring.)
Oh yeah. and I have a problem with tenses I know Dx.
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Script Writer's Note:
I must warn you before you start reading, once you flip to the first page, you can never turn back. You will be trapped inside a world like no other. You have been warned.
~ XxLovexX



(Scene: A beautiful spring morning. Students are walking to school.)

Jasmine:
(looks at the timer) GAH! I'm late again! (She rushes out of bed and gets ready, then she runs downstairs and grabs her bookbag. She rushes out the door. Her brown hair is in a mess and her clothes are creased and a bit messy.)

After blocks of running .....

Jasmine: (sighs) I finally made it! (Calmly enters the classroom).

Teacher
(faces the students)
Since today is the last day of school, and a half a day, you can have a free period.

Class:
(cheers and smiles).

Jasmine:
Uh. What can I do in 4 hours? (starts to take a book out when she overhears the conversation behind her).

Girl #1:
(to Girl #2) Hey! Did you hear about that stupid website?

Girl #2:
(to Girl #1) Yeah, it tricked everyone AND it gave some people a virus.

Jasmine:
(buds into their conversations)
What website are you guys talking about?

Girl #1:
(to Jasmine) This stupid website you don't want to know about.

Jasmine:
(Her green eyes widen a little big) Oh can I just get the link?

Girl # 2:
(hands her a piece of paper with the link) I'm warning you, it's really stupid.

Jasmine:
(takes the piece of piece of paper and goes back to her seat to put it in her bookbag. Then she rushes back to the two girls).
What exactly does this thing do?

Girl #2: It claims to give you something, instead it causes a virus. Are you seriously going to try this?


Jasmine:
Yep! I'm extremely curious.

Girl #1: Kay
(goes back to talking to girl #2)

Jasmine:
(Goes back to her seat and reads for the rest of the time)

Teacher:
(gets out of her seat) Class is over. Feel free to go home.

Class: (rushes out, some people scream) WOOT. It's summer vacation!

Jasmine:
(rushes out of class and hurries home).

Jasmine: (runs home) (shouts) MOM I'M HOME! (rushes upstairs into her room. She starts organizing all of her things. Then at night, after dinner, she goes to her laptop and types the link. She sees a black screen with a white box that says "Click here".)
They were extremely creative with the website weren't they? Uh, there's no harm in clicking it (pauses) right? I mean I can fix a virus.

Some Random Voice in her head:
(in a ghostly voice) Click it. YOU NEED TO CLICK IT!!

Jasmine:
(she clicks the button. All of a sudden she feels weak. Her arms start to tremble somewhat, and it's harder for her to breathe.)
I fe-
(she fainted)

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Ohh. So uh, this is boring, I know. Like I said it's just an introduction. The next manga, I'm going to write about how the 4 or 5 people meet each other and their story, and how they get a note to meet the queen and all that.

Anything I should add to this chapter Dx ?

I love the storyline *^* That idea about mods helping them is just so awesome~

Nice choice of names.
Did you send it to the artist?
(Edit: Don't worry too much about grammar. That's what proofreaders are for. And you should probably use different names. Like, a different name for the queen, supermods, etc.)

ValkyriaGirl wrote:

I love the storyline *^* That idea about mods helping them is just so awesome~

^^ Thanks. It took a bit of time to come up with(: .

@Admin: There's only one.. so far B). I gave her the link ^^. ^^" I don't think I should because everyone in the Otakuzone world will have weird names, well like usernames, since it's otakuzone. Thanks for the suggestion !

I meant that it would be kind of like favorism to some users? They would want to be in it too, and wonder why stargazerlily and katantoon were chosen, or something like that.

Admin wrote:

I meant that it would be kind of like favorism to some users? They would want to be in it too, and wonder why stargazerlily and katantoon were chosen, or something like that.

It isn't favoritism, but true, some people just assume things like that xD.
Uh. What kind of nicknames should I give them then?
Moderators and Regular users are going to be in it as well :3.. once I get their permission that is .

This is not boring c:

cool..I like it..d^^b

Seriously, I don't see a lot of mistakes.
And I had goosebumps in the end, lol xD

midori2 wrote:

Seriously, I don't see a lot of mistakes.
And I had goosebumps in the end, lol xD

LOL. Really? Is it because she fainted?

Well, the whole scene in my mind. ;D

midori2 wrote:

Well, the whole scene in my mind. ;D

LOL. Oh.
It's not actually that scary since I wrote a summary, so you should know what's going to happen next 8D.

OMG That was so amazing! You don't have enough faith in yourself

SoraAngel wrote:

OMG That was so amazing! You don't have enough faith in yourself

;w; tell me how to improve..?