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PostSubject: Review for 8:20 by Butter, written by Alyss. [Scene 1]   Review for 8:20 by Butter, written by Alyss. [Scene 1] EmptyWed Jul 13, 2011 6:34 am
When police officer Robin discovers a mangled corpse, the evidence points to a serial killer titled the "Lady Killer." Complications arise as new faces emerge, and Robin's skills are put to the test as he endeavors to catch the "Lady Killer" before he strikes again.


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Really short, I know. I didn't want to give too much away, and I also have really no idea what's going to happen so...yeah. Butter, if you want me to reveal names, let me know; if not, then I guess that's the review for this chapter. x.x
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PostSubject: Re: Review for 8:20 by Butter, written by Alyss. [Scene 1]   Review for 8:20 by Butter, written by Alyss. [Scene 1] EmptyWed Jul 13, 2011 10:42 am
No, this is perfect. <33 Summaries are supposed to be short.
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PostSubject: Re: Review for 8:20 by Butter, written by Alyss. [Scene 1]   Review for 8:20 by Butter, written by Alyss. [Scene 1] EmptyWed Jul 13, 2011 8:42 pm
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PostSubject: Re: Review for 8:20 by Butter, written by Alyss. [Scene 1]   Review for 8:20 by Butter, written by Alyss. [Scene 1] EmptyThu Jul 14, 2011 5:39 am
I agree with kittie~ It's short, but you've said everything that needs to be said Very Happy
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