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| Subject: Surprise_Samuraigirl123 Review Mon Sep 19, 2011 6:04 pm | |
| This is short..
This short story is about Sam’s father who does some pretty surprising things to cover up for certain issues with an ironic twist.
Any suggestions or improvements?
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| Subject: Re: Surprise_Samuraigirl123 Review Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:13 pm | |
| This short story is about Sam’s father who does some pretty surprising things to cover up for certain issues with an ironic twist. | |
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Nomiko Moderator
Posts : 282 Points : 14385 Join date : 2011-07-01 Age : 27 Location : IAmNotTellingVille☻♥
| Subject: Re: Surprise_Samuraigirl123 Review Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:29 pm | |
| Okay. I'll strip that out. | |
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