I've only completed page one for now. I'll be cleaning up page 2 and 3 tomorrow at the latest, but you can typeset this one meanwhile
https://2img.net/h/i1093.photobucket.com/albums/i437/ValkyriaGirl/scan0074copy.png
And oh yeah, I added some speech bubbles, but I'm not sure if there'll be enough space for all dialogues. And for the final square, you'll notice it's empty, but that's coz the guy is supposed to have disappeared v.v I didn't manage to make it look that way though -fails-
Just PM if there's any further question